Bonjour pouvez vous m'aidez en anglais je dois corriger mes fautes et allonger ma redaction, la consigne c'est de dire que on es immigrant à Londre et on ecrit

Bonjour pouvez vous m'aidez en anglais je dois corriger mes fautes et allonger ma redaction, la consigne c'est de dire que on es immigrant à Londre et on ecrit une lettre a nos famille habitant au Caraibes en expliquant ma vie a Londres:
Dear family,
I'm arrived at London with Anais my sister at London. London is a dream destination,and they are different cultures. London it's a very big city. I like the big red buses. The the taxis are also expensive This week, we are visiting the Houses of Parliament and Tower Bridge. Next week, we ware going to sie Big Ben and the British Museum. What about you. What's the weather like in Carribean Know ? London is beautiful both historical and geographical, they have a life that brings all their charms. I think london is a goad destination because you can go there to relax or to grow. XOXO ELENA voila vous pouvez corrigez les fautes et allonger ma redaction merci