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HELP
bonjour, est ce possible de corriger mes fautes, améliorer mon texte et ajouter des phrases ? Je dois faire un discours pour devenir délégué, tout d'abord, on doit se présenter ( nom prénom hobbies...), dire 3 choses que l'on voudrait faire dans notre lycée, et expliquer pourquoi on voudrait devenir délégué
merci d avance a ceux qui m'aideront ​
HELP bonjour, est ce possible de corriger mes fautes, améliorer mon texte et ajouter des phrases ? Je dois faire un discours pour devenir délégué, tout d'abord,

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  • Hello, my name is Anna and I am fourteen years old , I am a teenager and live in roisel.I am friendly but shy ,hard working but clumsy and I am honest.One of my favorites hobbie is musculation , I love helping people. I am a serious person and a very attentive listener . Et le reste et juste

  • Bonsoir,

    Tous les "i" doivent être capitalisés.

    "Hello,

    [...] fourteen ( pas forteen ) years old, and I'm a teenager.  

    [...] I practice the ( pas de "the") musculation, it's my hobbies. ( Comme c'est au pluriel, tu dois rajouter au moins un de tes loisirs ).

    I also love to help people. I'm serious and attentive.

    If you elect ( pas de e ) I would ( pas will ) put distributors and benches through the HighSchool and expand corridors.

    I propose the ideas ( il y a 2 idées ) of having 2 hours to eat and to add more plugs in the establishment to recharge our phone's battery.

    If I was the class president, I would help you to find solutions for your problems.  

    I want to represent my class and to defend its concepts.

    Ce qui donne:

    "Hello,

    My name is Anna, I am fourteen years old and I'm a teenager. I live in Roisel. I'm friendly, hard-working, honest but I'm clumsy and a bit shy. I practice musculation and... ( mets un autre loisir ici ), that are my hobbies. I also love to help people. I'm serious and attentive.

    If you elect me, I would put distributors and benches through the HighSchool and expand corridors. I also propose the ideas of having 2 hours to eat and to add more plugs in the establishment to recharge our phone's battery.

    If I was the class president, I would help you to find solutions for your problems. I want to represent my class and to defend its concepts."

    Bonne chance!

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