(3eme)Bonsoir, j’ai fait un texte en Anglais mais j’ai des difficultés à cette matière, pouvez-vous me le corriger merci d’avance. My name is Chloé, I am 14 yea
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(3eme)Bonsoir, j’ai fait un texte en Anglais mais j’ai des difficultés à cette matière, pouvez-vous me le corriger merci d’avance.
My name is Chloé, I am 14 years old and I’m 167cm tall. I live in paris with my dad and my mom, xavier and ana and I was born there on January 18th 2005. I have one brother Yannick who is 23 years old and he dwell in Luxembourg for his studies.My star sign is capricorn.
I don’t have pets but one of my dream is to have one dog.My favorite sport is boxing and I do this twice a week.
I love to cook,sleep, eat,watch moovies on Netflix and I also love watch vidéos on YouTube and hang out with friends.
I am half portuguese and half spain because my mom is born on portugal and my dad is as well half spain. Later, I would like traveling in the world for discover news landscapes, culture and dish. My favorite food it’s pizza, Yummy!
I have long hair brown straight and brown eyes. I don’t like spiders but I love monkeys. I am taller than my mom.
My name is Chloé, I am 14 years old and I’m 167cm tall. I live in paris with my dad and my mom, xavier and ana and I was born there on January 18th 2005. I have one brother Yannick who is 23 years old and he dwell in Luxembourg for his studies.My star sign is capricorn.
I don’t have pets but one of my dream is to have one dog.My favorite sport is boxing and I do this twice a week.
I love to cook,sleep, eat,watch moovies on Netflix and I also love watch vidéos on YouTube and hang out with friends.
I am half portuguese and half spain because my mom is born on portugal and my dad is as well half spain. Later, I would like traveling in the world for discover news landscapes, culture and dish. My favorite food it’s pizza, Yummy!
I have long hair brown straight and brown eyes. I don’t like spiders but I love monkeys. I am taller than my mom.
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1. Réponse Celiiiiiine
Explications:
"he lives in luxembourg" tu veut plutôt dire ?
"my astrological sign is..."
"moovies" il n'y a qu'un o
"half Spanish... "
"my mom was born.."
"my dad is as well half Spanish"
J'aurait plutôt mis "I would like to travel all around the world to discover new landscapes"